by lostlllsoul Feb 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Looking back at yesterday at what i could see, |
by J Lau
Great work! I love the poem, but the presentation of the poem breaks up the flow. If I may suggest grouping them back together and into three stances, it will help to retain the reader's interest. Keep up the great work! 5/5 |