Uv got so much emotion tucked away in a few lines. well written poem. I liked it... but I didn't like that it was sad *tear* I don't like sad poems... even tho i've written a few but I think they're awesome 4 helpin u deal with things... writing about my dad didn't help that much but I feel more able to cope.... anyway... good job keep it up

Beautiful, and straight to the point
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