This is What i feel..Part II

by The Poetic Child   Feb 26, 2006


The Knife is on my chest
My hands are clenching tight
This very single day
Just might be the Night

Everyday i go through sorrow
Cause i always think of you
It just adds more weight to me
just the more i think of you

But i cant get you out my head
every second your in me
in school or in bed
to bad you cant see

It just kills me inside
the way you broke it off
i feel like a piece of cotton
easy to break and soft

you cried when you said it
but it never seemed it hurt
Because right now I'm the only one
Who is thrown up in the dirt

I'm the one right now
who cant get on there feet
I'm the one right now
Who has to accept Defeat

And your the one right now
Hanging out with your crew
And your the one right now
That can say " i love you"

But you can say it to another
You already found a new man
Thats why this bullet is in the gun
and the gun is in my hand

I feel like I'm nothing at all
I just hate the fact were separated
i feel like I'm just so worthless
a worthless guy that God created...

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Wow...this is as amazing jus like the other one..i luv this one jus as much....

    ~!Sandra!~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Snap out of it?!?!?!?

    Seriously you're nto worthless..SHE chose to end it SHE chose to leave you for him...SHE is the one ot blame. But dotn dwell on it i kno thats hard..and when peesp tel u that it nvr makes sense.....but hang in their...though i am far away i do care you're lei ka bro to me. PLEASE HANG IN THEIR BUDDY!! *huggs* You kno where to find me...if u need me. xoxo LYLAB

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by ReBecca

    You're too young to have all this pain over a girl. she was probably your first love, but there will be many more after her. i know that doesnt take away how you are feeling right now, but understand, that picking up a knife or a gun is never the answer. it takes more courage to live then to die. believe me i know. keep your head up, sweetie, and know that all things must pass. even this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Oh this is so sad, but really good I must say. I loved this poem. You are a truly talented writer. Keep it up :).

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