I enjoyed this poem, it was interesting and captivating. I liked the repitition of the last two lines of the verse.... It's very effective. Good poem, keep it up.
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Your quote is lyrics for swan lake soundtrack:Far longer than forever, I'll hold you in my heart and feel as though your here with me although we're far apart.
I Love that song very much!!!!!
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Lol, any way your poem is great i can totaly related to it!!!! keep it up 5/5