Hunni you are a savior, I hope he can see what an Angel you truely are...Part of this poem made me think about my brother, he smoke weed and some times do drugs and this weekend he ended up in a mental hospital for taking some drugs that messed up his head real bad, he could have died bur survived!! I was so scared and just wanted to hold him and be his angel, I was the one going with him to the hospi´tal, because my parents were on a get away this weekend, I saw his pain and how he was dying.....I love ya hunn, I am always here for you. |
That reminds me of this guy I'm have "relationship" problems with. One day...(if any day at all) when I let him read all the poems I've written for him...I hope you don't mind if I read this one to him, too! |
by Jen
Awww huni that was great! I can so relate to it. You did a fantastic job expressing yourself! Keep writing! |
by Ophelia
Beautiful poem! |
by Kurt
Very good poem. Definately one of the rare few that deserves the top picks. |
Hey, i really like this. I can really relate to it right now as im in a similar predicament with a guy right now. Best of luck to you and him....... But if somehow you fail, just remember, you cant save them all..... |
by AnAstAciA
This is one of the rarest poem i can totally relate too, especially now...may i use your poem??? may i show it to that person i am intresed in? Because all he does is pushing me away:( |
by Anonymous
Good poem... I can identify with your emotion |
by nina wiseman
That is so true |
by Alexis
I really love this poem. I knew a guy like that and that totally descibed how I feelt. Great job! |
by Tony
Wow..i've read some of ur poems and seriously they're amazing..u seem sweet too! gr8 writing keep it up cz im lookin forward 2 reading more =) |
by *Alanna*
That's a really good poem. |
Simply Great! |
by Jess
OMG!!!! I LOVE YOUR POEM IM GOING THROUGH THINGS LIKE THAT TO WITH A GUY! THIS POEM REALLY SHOWS HOW I FEEL |
by aDORKable x3
Ah, a wonderful write! I enjoyed reading this one! |
Once Again A Marvrelouse Poem Done By You...I Love Your Way Of Writting! This Poem Of Yours Has A Great Message And Meaning! Hope To See More Of Your Poems... |
by Unconformist
So much feeling! i just love it! keep writing! all of your poems are just, wow! |
I know how this feels i know u put it in a way i never could |