Wow, i really liked this one. i could just see everything in my mind that you were describing. excellent work, keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

Ditto molls...its great
love you keep it up
~cherryberryferrylerryairyyyah

HAH me funy

This poem has some interest,although some of the lines are confusing and slightly disjointed overall its a good work