Interesting poem. Very good though, i liked it.

Excellent my dear. beautifully said, I loved every word of it. Great job, luv ya-xxx-

Wow totally amazing
loved every line. esp the last line :)
keep it up gal. thnx 4 da comment on ma poem btw :)
much lov
N3mA xxxxxx

I like the repeat of the line "there might just be anywhere". i think it takes the poem up to a new level.

I also adored all the questions. i question everyting, so this was kool. rock on honey!!! your work is my pride!

: ) Suzie

Very interesting write, I love it! Powerfully sad, but unique! Excellent poem, a great choice of words!

WOW!!!
amazing mona!!
see this is why i love you...coz all your poems make me feel something!!
i love it
well done huni
xxxxxxxx

Wow, i really like this poem. it holds your attention well:) thanks for the comment!xx

Wow, this was so powerful, and I can't tell where the power came from. The whole thing was just amazing and my comments are becoming crappy because I'm running out of things to say, awesome poem, keep up the good work.

Might as well be a dark hole
As black as coal

WOW. I love that line, it was so awesome, yet, the flow was a little off considering that the line "as black as coal" was a little short compared to might as well be a black hole

Maybe you could change it to "Maybe a black hole?"

I don't know, anyways, great write.

Loved this poem thanks 4 your coment meant alot take care hun sarah x