Let Me Go.. Don't Hold Me Back.

by Luke   Feb 26, 2006


Let Me End It And Make It Better..
I\'ll Let You Read My Sadness, In The Suicide Letter...
It\'s For the Best.. And You\'ll Soon See..
The Pain This Life Is Causing Me..

Thats Right.. Hold My Hand And don\'t Let Me Fade..
But Then Again Look At the Sadness I\'ve Seemed To Have Made..
It\'s For The Best.. So Let Me Go..
Before The Tears On Your Face Start To Show.

You\'re Stronger Than Me.. And You\'ve Got More Love..
Mines All Gone... And I\'m Already Above..
The Gates Are Locked.. But I\'ll Wait For The Key..
Because I\'d Rather Not Show The Depressed Me..

What I\'m Trying To Say.. Is You Could Help And Hope..
But Help Me By Tying The Knot In The Rope..
Because By Holding Me Back.. You\'re Killing Me Inside..
I\'ve Come To The End.. End Of This Ride.

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 26th Febuary 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    This is good......no need to think about suicide tho even tho i do....i actually can understand what ur saying

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, this is so powerful and heartbreaking!

    "The Gates Are Locked.. But I'll Wait For The Key" I love these lines!
    Excellent poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    WOAH! This is deep my friend... Welcome to CC&P. A truly powerful poem, so sad and haunting, but great all the same!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess Beautifully Broken

    Wow.....amazing poem. But very very sad. I can feel everything ure felling when i read this. Well done!!!! 5/5 as always!
    ~*tess*~
    oh and i no i sound desperate but can u plz read my 2 new poems:
    *The Game Of Love* and
    *A Small Part of Her* ???

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    First Luke, welcome to CC&P...I too am a member, looking forward to your presence with us!

    Second!! WOW we have just got mad new talent from you!!! THis poem, omg I'm shocked!! When I read this I seriously did not intend for it to be so powerful and different..those first two lines....GREAT JOB, you left the reader interested!
    I am terribly sorry if this is true hun, gosh it hurts me so much to read a member of our groups pain..even if I don't know you..feel free to express yourself to us no matter what!
    Nice write! 5/5

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