First Luke, welcome to CC&P...I too am a member, looking forward to your presence with us!

Second!! WOW we have just got mad new talent from you!!! THis poem, omg I'm shocked!! When I read this I seriously did not intend for it to be so powerful and different..those first two lines....GREAT JOB, you left the reader interested!
I am terribly sorry if this is true hun, gosh it hurts me so much to read a member of our groups pain..even if I don't know you..feel free to express yourself to us no matter what!
Nice write! 5/5

Wow.....amazing poem. But very very sad. I can feel everything ure felling when i read this. Well done!!!! 5/5 as always!
~*tess*~
oh and i no i sound desperate but can u plz read my 2 new poems:
*The Game Of Love* and
*A Small Part of Her* ???

WOAH! This is deep my friend... Welcome to CC&P. A truly powerful poem, so sad and haunting, but great all the same!!

Wow, this is so powerful and heartbreaking!

"The Gates Are Locked.. But I'll Wait For The Key" I love these lines!
Excellent poem!

This is good......no need to think about suicide tho even tho i do....i actually can understand what ur saying