The poem was written in my room and i never had been camping but i know a little of it from watching tv.i welcome your remarks negative and posoitive but most of all i want to hear the truth

This i a good poem you have alot of potensial

Wow.. that was very beatiful, and descriptive. I love it, can't wait to read more =)

Wow, I loved it. The poem has a lot of description for someone who has never been camping. Awsome Job, keep up the good work.

~Joe~

Awww, you've reminded me of how much I love camping.. You really should go sometime. Your descriptions are brilliant, but it's much more relaxing in real life. :) Keep up the good work!

~Jessica

Wow this is is a great poem i love it keep up the great work charles