Very very nice :) also wonderful ending :"As the sky slowly turns dark."
it deserves a 5/5 :)

Awesome poem!! I loved it. I love how you expressed your feelings in a way that many people can relate! Keep it up!

I loved it, great job :) 5/5

Wonderful poem!! i don't know if the story's true, but it's definitely amazing!! keep up the good work cause you're really talented!

It was sweet. Most of your poems are sweet.I like that. 5/5
-Vino

Awesome...it's so realistic and sad...almost like romeo and juliet! it's also really symbolic and i know what you mean! love it! hope you continue writing such great poems like these!