Comments : Abuse... Or Not?

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    I like this part
    "You take away my happiness
    and thats not what you should do
    I used to love you with all my heart
    But you stole that from me too."

    nice pattern, good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Reminds me of how I feel about someone right now
    Heartfelt =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    This Poem is very well written. Awesome Job. Keep up the good work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Another nice poem!....well written!....and loved the flow!
    ~*Linz*~