I really really like this. its a beautiful picture of soft romance and really gives you a clear idea. like if rachel drew a picture...she couldn't get this because in your poem you can feel it as well as see it. a well deserved 5/5 ^.^

Hey, that was good!! If you would like, check out my newest poem, dedicated to God. Its called Living for You...Hope you like it!! Great job on your poem!:)