Wow try and say that in one breath..wow that was the biggest run on sentane ever haha anyways gratt analogy i lvoe it. Keep up ur amazn work hunn. love it.

LISSA

Hey, thanks for the comment..sorry it's a little late returning it.

I like what you're saying here, but maybe (I'm only suggesting) you could make it easier to read by for example saying:
Running from the memories that always seem to last
The ones that keep me up all night
The ones that amke me laugh

I really do like what you've got here. 5/5 I'm just suggesting this. Everyone has their own style of writing. Keep up the writing!