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by shobhana kumar
Good one Bhavin. there is a lot of meaning in this piece of work - it is easy to see that it comes from the depths of your heart. just a suggestion: Born and bred in a lonely world I resemble like a halloween ghost. the line would read better and correctly if it were "I resemble a halloween ghost". also, the last line of the first stanza should porbably read - I haunt this mysterious coast." just a suggestion. otherwise, i think this poem holds tremembdous meaning. good luck and peace shobhana