Those two songs appear to be magical, they inspired you to write a true masterpiece. Well done! I liked the use of imagery in this poem. Bravo!

I like how you've managed to convey how the music affected you and a sort of connection to how the artist felt. It really came out well and you did a great job.

Jemma

I have never herd them but maybe i should now if they inspire u so well xox

Excellent Job and Very True...and please if you comment my work dont comment on this account..i have another account.where i have over 124 poems..lol i got the same poetry awards as you..2 gold and 2 silver..
♪♥Torn Pieces of my Heart♥♪
Thats my name..so if you comment me please do so on that account..i only use this account for a certain club
Great Job on this poem..and i like that song from Papa Roach.:-D
Great job once again
5/5
~TPOMH~

I adore the simplicity of your verses, and the raw feel of this poem. The songs actually started playng in my head while I read this -- that's a neat trick, lol. Toutefois, c'est une poème très passionante et vivide. Brava!

Cheers, Krystle