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by LostHopesCrimsonTears Feb 27, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about death
You were all that i wanted so perfect for me everything I needed right there, just barely out of reach I thought it was true that we were meant to be but soon I discovered you never really loved me too soon did I loose you but little did I know this was just gods way of telling me it was time for me to go.Copyright©2006 Amanda Hope Indelicato
by J Lau
Nicely done! Keep up the good work.
by master of shadow
Very wellw ritten with a smooth flow though out. very good use of vocab within. 5/5
by amelia
Amazing ! 5/5 very nicely & neatly written short poem liked it love amy