Set you Free

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   Feb 27, 2006


How can you hurt me
When I love you so much
Push me away
While I yearn for your touch

You tell me you care
When its all just a lie
Not caring that I sit here
Just wishing to die

Hoping you'll kill me
So I'll finally be free
Wishing you meant it
When you said you loved me

A death wish I have
Is soon to come true
For I know I was stupid
For ever trusting you

So take it all away
My life and my pain
My death will set you free
I wont die in vain

Copyright©2006 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~ w8ñGïñÐÄrÄïñ ~*~

    So take it all away
    My life and my pain
    My death will set you free
    I wont die in vain

    OuCh!..
    HeHeH..
    aNyWaY, grEaT pOem!!.. ^^,

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like the simple language you have used here, it makes the piece sound more realistic. Usually I hate rhyme (lol as stated in my other review), but I liked the rhyming in this, I think it came naturally and added to the piece. I also liked how you focus on describing your sadness rather than your love for Mr. Man, simply because in this context it's a different perspective to what I usually read. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excellent poem, this was great!

    Love,
    Line

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great flow and expression in this peice. and the rhyming sems very natural and not at all forced.

    5/5

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