Don't Let Me Go..

by Luke   Feb 27, 2006


I'm Trying Out A New Style/Format Of Poetry.. Here's My First Go..
Please Tell Me What you Think..

I'll Be Yours Forever..
Please Hold Me Tight..
Don't Let Me Go..
No Matter How Much We Fight..

Tell Me You Love Me..
Tell Me You Care..
Don't Let Me Go..
I'll Always Be There..

Sing Me That Song..
The Song About Love..
Don't Let Me Go..
When Push Comes To Shove..

Make Me Feel Safe..
Always Be With Me..
Don't Let Me Go..
Why Ain't Love Easy..?

Just Don't Disappear..
Don't Fade Away..
Just Let Me Go..
I'll See You Another Day.

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 27th Febuary 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    I like the flow of this... and the twist you put at the end in reversing the theme of previous stanzes... changing the perspective to "Just let me go" yet not really letting go. Great work! Keep it up. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    You say this is a new style. Couldn't be. You're a pro. I love it- both the poem and the style. It really works for you.

    *hugs and smiles*
    Mary

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is great work... A new style you say? Well it works for you, you should try some more in this style. I quite like writing in that style, it's nice when you get a good flow just like this one. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    This is a GREAT poem.....

    its amazing...

    keep it up

    comment back plz

    xoxo
    elissa aka
    cuky

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