This is a GREAT poem.....

its amazing...

keep it up

comment back plz

xoxo
elissa aka
cuky

This is great work... A new style you say? Well it works for you, you should try some more in this style. I quite like writing in that style, it's nice when you get a good flow just like this one. :)

You say this is a new style. Couldn't be. You're a pro. I love it- both the poem and the style. It really works for you.

*hugs and smiles*
Mary

I like the flow of this... and the twist you put at the end in reversing the theme of previous stanzes... changing the perspective to "Just let me go" yet not really letting go. Great work! Keep it up. 5/5