by Patrick Feb 27, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
Your name may slip from my mind. |
Great peice, the begining grabs the reader and the end is very powerful. very effectivly written and planed out. |
by Adriana
I like how people write poems about friendship....and this poem made me love it even more...thank you for such a delightful poem.... |
by Laura
I thought this was a very nice dedication to your friend. It reminded me of my best friend. We lost contact as she had to move but anytime she comes back for a visit I am the first she calls. It can be tough to be seperated from a freindship this close but you have nicely conveyed te feeling of a true friendship. Well done! |
by Kaylee
Message clear, even more if you could edit out those site signs for the word other's. Your poem starte stronger and showed frendship as it should be. |
by Allison
That was a awsome poem. Keep up the good work, you are really talented. *5/5* |