Comments : Friendship Is Forever

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. this is reli gr8 and a wonderful dedication.. i noe wat this feels like, and im glad u wer able to write about it and be positive about the whole thing.. may fav part is ur last stanza, especially these two lines:

    "The name has been forgotten, the face is unknown.
    But this person was my friend, this I know. "

    gr8 job
    take care
    Nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was a awsome poem. Keep up the good work, you are really talented. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Message clear, even more if you could edit out those site signs for the word other's. Your poem starte stronger and showed frendship as it should be.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    I thought this was a very nice dedication to your friend. It reminded me of my best friend. We lost contact as she had to move but anytime she comes back for a visit I am the first she calls. It can be tough to be seperated from a freindship this close but you have nicely conveyed te feeling of a true friendship. Well done!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    I like how people write poems about friendship....and this poem made me love it even more...thank you for such a delightful poem....

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, the begining grabs the reader and the end is very powerful. very effectivly written and planed out.

    5/5