Beautiful and perfect but a monster withen

by UnToLd TrUtH   Feb 27, 2006


How can someone so beautiful and perfect be a horrible monster?
the smooth black hair as I put run my hand through it.
The pale skin as i run my other hand up his shirt. Those intense, intelligent cold black eyes as i gaze into them. The feel of his hand on my neck. The way he gentle tilts my head to the side. The softness of his lips ans he lays tiny kisses on my neck. The pain of his teeth puncturing my throat. The feel of his other hand around my waist drawing me closer to him. My heart racing as I feel faint. The memories of my life flash before my eyes. The feeling you know you are going to die but can do nothing but accept it. the feel of him letting me go as I slip to the ground and sigh.

**I don't know if this is really good. I just got this idea one day in class. So can you plz comment??**

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  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Oh wow this is amazing. great imagery.
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    It was a good poem!
    it had alot of darkness in it as well, it was good! good imagination as well!
    thanks for the comments on my poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Great imagery in the poem and i could really feel the emotion in it.i liked it xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    I lyke thiz one its gud u can almost put your self there

    ~~JStuckie~~

  • 18 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I liked it very much

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