by UnToLd TrUtH Feb 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I'm scared of the todays. |
The world is definately scary, your not wrong there, i liked this one alot. simple and straight to the point. |
by Kayla
I was reading a long and thinking that if you could just change the "I'm scared of the......." lines and add variety this poem would be 5 times as better. then when i got to the bottom i realized what a good poem this could be if you just changed it up a little and it doesnt even have to ryme as long as you did that. although that would make it even better. lots of love, kayla**keep strong and don't give up hope** |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this. |
by xxMagioxx
I read your post in my discussion, im srry you feel this way but it isn't your fault, I should know, my family is like that to me too. Awesome poem by the way |
by CY GINDLE
You forgot. " i'm scared i'll always |