Scared

The world is definately scary, your not wrong there, i liked this one alot. simple and straight to the point.

much love and many kisses,
bex

I was reading a long and thinking that if you could just change the "I'm scared of the......." lines and add variety this poem would be 5 times as better. then when i got to the bottom i realized what a good poem this could be if you just changed it up a little and it doesnt even have to ryme as long as you did that. although that would make it even better. lots of love, kayla**keep strong and don't give up hope**

I liked this.
It was filled with emotion which is why I enjoyed it so much, I liked the wording particularly.

I read your post in my discussion, im srry you feel this way but it isn't your fault, I should know, my family is like that to me too. Awesome poem by the way

Tony :D love ya
comment on some of my poems if you have time plz

You forgot. " i'm scared i'll always
be scare