by Cuddles Feb 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Can't you see it in my eyes? |
Vwey nicely done, enjoyed the flow, superb job!!! |
by shobhana kumar
This is really beautiful! might sound great as a song! |
by Loulou
KUDOS BABE THANKS FOR THE COMMENT I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS WRITTEN PERFECTLY ALOT OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE! |
Good job love. nicely written. it was passionate and happy, but at the same time it seemed quite sad and lonely. well good work once again! |
by Lithium
I understand were ur coming from good poem i love the wording in ur last line xox sam |