Comments : The Line Of Passion And Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    WHOA!! Truly incredible!

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    "You dismissed all my feelings,
    Like they never mattered at all.
    Then acted like it was my fault that I couldn't stand tall."

    The last line was long, I think you meant to cut it off so you'll have four lines all together.

    The poem itself was very good.

    Oh and for the record, I made -him- cry.

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