Tears

by Nelly   Feb 27, 2006


Rain falls,
Like tears from the stars,
Like tears from Mars.
Rain falls,
Like the tears in my mind,
Like the sorrow you'll find.
Rain falls,
Like the tears of my friend,
Like the tears of the end.
Rain falls,
Like the tears that I cry,
Like wishing I could die.
Rain falls,
Like tears from the stars,
I wish I was on Mars.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken Lullaby

    Hey, I liked it. But if i can, may i give some constructive critisism?
    I thought the ending Kind of took away the feeling of the poem. But hey that might just be me soo....yea lol but anyways good job 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    Very nice :) xx