Your work is wonderful you have captured a certain moment a descriptive inner peace that only a true poet can express .

I forgot to mention .please read my work and give a truthful comment

In my opinion your poem lacks character,its a bunch of old saying strung together,you need to be able to hold the readers attention and you failed to do that although you have ability to do much better.

Please disregard the last comment i made an error it was another poem i was remarking about and i must have clicked on the wrong person so sorry