Woah Bill... This is deep, moving and filled with hope and love! A wonderful.. no no, magnificent, beautiful, wonderfully written poem!!!

You write with such sincerity and honesty, and those are two things that aren't that common nowadays. And your words have so much feeling in them! You are truly one of the great ones, Bill.

Hey
wow awesome poem
ive loved every poem uve ever written...
and i read some poem abt deadwood...was wondering why anyone wud write bout smth so dark lol..yet it comes out amazingly well when u do.

if u can spare some time, i'd be honoured to get my poems critiqued bu a poet as esteemed as you!

Btw, i love your name :P sounds cowboyish

Excellent poem!! you can feel the emotions when you are reading it, keep expressing yourself so beautifully, it's wonderfull!

Very inspiring poem! loved it 5/5

check out some of my poems if you could!

Thanks,
Kelly

Another wonderful poem, I always look forward to reading your work. Keep it up!