Letting Go..

by Luke   Feb 27, 2006


Here\'s Another Of The New Style.. =D I\'m Getting Used To It..

I never thought..
I'd miss you this much..
Miss those soft lips..
The way we touch..

Now you're gone..
It's starting to hurt..
Killing me inside..
I feel like dirt..

Can't we start again..
Give it one last go..
Let me truly love you..
Let my love show?

Can't you trust me?
Are you in-secure..
Are you worried..
Why aren't you sure?

I'll take your silence..
As a message to leave..
It hurts so much..
Can't seem to breath.

Your words seem best..
I'll have to accept..
Let go the part of you..
That for ages I've kept.

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 27th Febuary 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    Yeah i know what you mean

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    Yeah i know what you mean

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    On a roll here... Superb write!! The flow is very nice :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey Luke, this poem is very good, the flow and rhyme are great. A few filler words can be removed and it will flow better. You and I have been working on your poems in the club discussions..... we can keep working on them there and make our own thread or you can email me PetesLadyLove@hotmail.com. I would like to continue to work on this with you. You are a talented young man and will go far with your writing. Loved this poem........

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Great poem! I love it, specially the last stanza. Excellent work.

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