Never the Same

by myshiningstar14   Feb 27, 2006


Without you my
world would turn,
my world would
burn.

I'd find myself in
a nightmare that'll
never cease, in a
darkened world so
cold that I can see
my breath.

I'd never be the same.

Without you my
world would decay,
my world would no
longer stay.

I'd find myself
in the loneliest and
most unhappy world.
in the ocean of my
own tears, slowly
drowning.

I'd never be the same.

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  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    God you really have alot of love poems.... where's the poems about God and your religion..... that's mostly what i write about seeking him or finding him.....
    but well there's not much that i can say that havent already with your love for your boy... except for the fact that you are like the most loyal and loving counterpart that i've ever read about..... i'm afraid that if you werent already taken, i would steal you in a

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Love the Dedication..Love your rhyme..Love your rhythm...everything in this poem was Excellent..it could have been better..your "boo" must be really happy...great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Great poem!! it had warmth in the words and emotion. thee rhythm of it was beautiful. the only thing is that i didnt know when to pause and when to not pause. use more punctuation or something. great poem though!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is so amazing. It's exactly the way I feel about my guy. Awesome poem!

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