This is so amazing. It's exactly the way I feel about my guy. Awesome poem!

Great poem!! it had warmth in the words and emotion. thee rhythm of it was beautiful. the only thing is that i didnt know when to pause and when to not pause. use more punctuation or something. great poem though!! 5/5

Love the Dedication..Love your rhyme..Love your rhythm...everything in this poem was Excellent..it could have been better..your "boo" must be really happy...great job
5/5
~TPOMH~

God you really have alot of love poems.... where's the poems about God and your religion..... that's mostly what i write about seeking him or finding him.....
but well there's not much that i can say that havent already with your love for your boy... except for the fact that you are like the most loyal and loving counterpart that i've ever read about..... i'm afraid that if you werent already taken, i would steal you in a