Great flow and description in this peice.

5/5

This takes a sort of completely different direction from your other works. In most of your poems I notice you sort of begin with one theme or base and then work off to something completely different through a sort of simile build up like when you change one word to another. But here you have kept the same theme consistant the whole way through. A different approach but again damn effective. Its more like a story than a poem, and yet a poem in every sense and a terrific one at that. I dont know, you confuse and intrigue me. Each piece is something new, something equally as radiant.