Charles, this poem is excellent, I can feel your passion, and envision where this could be.
Thank you for your comments on my poetry, Keep writing!
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This poem doesn't have the greatest format or content. But you got your point out on the poem.
The flow is a little off.
And so is the format.
But other than that, good job.

It's not a five but it deserves it.

You did it again charles another wonderful work 5/5