You're my whisper of hope

by LockedInEternity   Feb 28, 2006


A faint whisper of hope,
A voice far away.
Telling me silently,
That it'll all be ok.

A spirit awakening,
The voice gave it hope.
That voice somewhere distant,
Descending the slope.

A truth in it all,
The world starts to make sense.
The tender voice,
Soothing.
The water so dense.

T'was a lock on the door,
But it is now it is gone.
My spirit wants more,
It seems to be drawn.

Ever so slightly,
Your voice carries on,
The smile in me,
Growing
The spirit,
A pawn.

The voice that had saved me.
The voice that I know.
A delicate flower,
That's ready to grow.

T'was you it belonged to,
To me it gave power.
You helped me move on
Not a cell left to cower.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Nice I like this it's so sweet! This is one of my favourite poems of yours well done! lol I run out of things to say I've commented like 9 of yours or something already and they're all so good!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very sweet... One of my favorites of yours, and I've always HATED friendship poems..So nicely portrayed.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Mmm. Not as long as your others.
    But it's a great poem. I liked it. The flow and wording was great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bluey!

    Aww how sweet, as the others I read, ver nice, keep up the good work!