Wow, that was a pretty deep poem. I lvoe the flow and the ryhme scheme. keep it up, you'll go far.

Another great poem

I liked the poem. I know how you feel man. I lost someone special too. I can't take it.. But good stuff.

Hey great poem!...i really liked it

This is a GREAT poem =] You're a very good aspiring writer and keep up the great work !!!!

I loved it. it is really good. like seriously.

Wow this poem is so deep..i lost a friend well more of a lover he killed him self:( and i never told him i loved him...don't make that mistake (it will kill you after)anyways greta poem 5/5
i love it ur full of talent
auna

This is really good. i lovee it. keep it up/