Burns

by Kurt   Feb 28, 2006


I can't believe how this happens
Time and time again
I'm drenched
In sorrowful rain

You two are so happy
Yet i frown tonight
Burning i feel overcome
Smothering my fright

I wanted you so bad
I exerted all i could
Love nevers ends
The way it should

Boiling alone
I cannot hold for long
By the time you reach me
My sanity is gone

Be together tonight
Because i burn inside
I couldn't control my anger
Even when I tried

I'm breaking down
Falling apart
Condemned at the end
Rejected at the start

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  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    Very good....
    powerful...
    xxx
    abby

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Amazing...really it is

  • 18 years ago

    by Kenshin

    You two are so happy
    Yet i frown tonight
    Burning i feel overcome
    Covering lovers fright

    ^^^ the above stanza could use a little working, the rest of the poem was really good, becuase you showed your true feeling to the one and at the same time the hurt from the realationship that significant other has with their lover.

    well done on this poem and thank you for the kind comment on my collaboration

  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    I can't believe how many of your poems could have easily been from my life.. we are not so different u and I

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This peice is very well put together and very powerfully written.

    5/5

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