This peice is very well put together and very powerfully written.

5/5

I can't believe how many of your poems could have easily been from my life.. we are not so different u and I

You two are so happy
Yet i frown tonight
Burning i feel overcome
Covering lovers fright

^^^ the above stanza could use a little working, the rest of the poem was really good, becuase you showed your true feeling to the one and at the same time the hurt from the realationship that significant other has with their lover.

well done on this poem and thank you for the kind comment on my collaboration

Amazing...really it is

Very good....
powerful...
xxx
abby