She's gone..

by Kurt   Feb 28, 2006


Trapped inside my own mind
Overwhelmed with pain
Damage was done
Emptiness remains

Comptemplate suicide
Disgusting memories
Savage images
Who i used to be

Friendship tattered trust
Subtle lies building up
Drinking deeply
From a poisoned cup

Bitterness tears me
Love leaves its scars
Silently gazing
Into brilliant stars

Zoning out
Visions blur
Tears flowing
All because of her

Tremendous pain
Stabs my spine
All of this
Must be a sign

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  • 18 years ago

    by lilly

    Admire.... i admire you for showing ur feelings! not many guys can do that! be proud of urself and if ur eva feeling so low .. i am always here if yiou need a helping hand! be proud be strong and keep writing poems! love em!
    i hv been in a situation before i know it is hard! but luv have faith!! =)!

  • 18 years ago

    by lindsay

    That was really good, but it kinda ended abruptly. great job tho.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This is a fantastic poem, great job, keep writing and take care sarah x

    p.s Thanks 4 your comment on mine.

  • Hey! again, that one was great! i love how you write its wonderful! you put so much feeling into it! and thank you for the comment! it really helped me out cuase im really new at this lol! so thanks a million! ill keep reading em!

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxdeathgurlxox

    Hi you left me a comment and i thought id read some of yours to you have a great way of expression i admire you your also a very talented writer and thank you for the comment