Comments : She's gone..

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Omg again great poem!!!
    i love reading your poems your sooooo good!!!
    keep it up!
    love jess XxXxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem fantastically written.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Very good! I loved it. Read a couple others which are great also. Keep it up and stay strong. thx for the comment on mine. -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by lianna

    This is sad!!
    i love how you write
    i love when guys express themselves with poems. its really sweet
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by IlliteracyKills

    A gorgeous poem darling, didn't flow at one point but the over all idea rules out any mistakes made...im very impressed
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxdeathgurlxox

    Hi you left me a comment and i thought id read some of yours to you have a great way of expression i admire you your also a very talented writer and thank you for the comment

  • Hey! again, that one was great! i love how you write its wonderful! you put so much feeling into it! and thank you for the comment! it really helped me out cuase im really new at this lol! so thanks a million! ill keep reading em!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This is a fantastic poem, great job, keep writing and take care sarah x

    p.s Thanks 4 your comment on mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by lindsay

    That was really good, but it kinda ended abruptly. great job tho.

  • 18 years ago

    by lilly

    Admire.... i admire you for showing ur feelings! not many guys can do that! be proud of urself and if ur eva feeling so low .. i am always here if yiou need a helping hand! be proud be strong and keep writing poems! love em!
    i hv been in a situation before i know it is hard! but luv have faith!! =)!