I kno exactly wat you are talking about omg its crazy....k well i broke up with my gf the other day so yea im pretty deppressed too but i kno exactly wat you are feeling becuz i was forced to break up with her and now........shes with someone else.......and i hate it but yea be happy!! everything will be fine eventually lol so yea im sure you are all ready happy again lol i hope you are tho....great poem and i give a 5/5!!!!! good job i loved it

Thats a really good poem!!! and it doesnt suck! dont worry about that.! keep writing5/5

I used to feel this way, i like you poem its beautiful and although i no longer feel this way it plays with my emotions, if you feel this way i hope you feel better lovely
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That was s00 sad..i felt that way with my 3X..but it ened happy n0w!!

Aww that was cute i know just how you feeling im going through something very similar...its gonna be ok!!! :)

Wow it doesnt suck at all so great...

"Just friends" sucks. This poem it great! Good job.

Awwwww!!! that sooo dosnt suck. that was reallyy good...i can totally relate to this. the last stanza was the bestt. anyways if you get a chance please check out my poems. you could prolly relate to mine as well.

Awwwww!!! that sooo dosnt suck. that was reallyy good...i can totally relate to this. the last stanza was the bestt. anyways if you get a chance please check out my poems. you could prolly relate to mine as well.

Great poem i love it.. i no how you feel.. n its really good! (the poem that is) itreally explains me in so may ways with my ex..

Great poem i love it.. i no how you feel.. n its really good! (the poem that is) itreally explains me in so may ways with my ex..

Very good poem sorry for how u feel hope things get better with you

I love it....its so moving

I can completely understand what you're going through. I wrote a poem about my situation too. Its called "Thoughtless Glances"...if you could check it out and comment that'd be awesome.

Thanks and great work!

*Kelly*

That was a really good poem

That really relates to what im going threw right now... that is a very awsome poem! keep it up hun.

Heyy i love your poem, i also lost a person i loved, and i am now whatching her love that other person more. its hard to see

Its not sucky its really good 5/5

445 votes with 4.5 as rating, do u still think that this poem of ur sucks...i am sure not now...lol

i must say, though the theme was sad but u just xpressed ur feelings in the best possible manner..amazing poem.

take care/stay strong and all the best

Ah tinydancer, i know exactly how you feel. so many times i have been in your place. the pain, the fear, the tears. they all just flow out from our hearts into our pens and into a piece of paper. a wonderful soul-stirring piece of poetry. loving and sad.