Comments : What I've Kept Inside

  • 18 years ago

    by TouchOfLove

    Hey! This is such a great poem! You've done a great job with it. And i only hope things get better for you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Regie*

    That is a beautiful poem!! it's great and im sorry if u feel tht way!!! just remmeber darls, there are always more fish in the say!! lol loved it! keep up th good work! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Aww, hun! this is incredibly amazing!!!!!!!

    very sweet of you to write...the best poems you write are those that come from the bottom of your heart...these are the real heartfelt poems =)

    I love the third and the last line..DUH! the poem overall is VERY amazing!
    even though your second line is repeated in other poems...but that doesn't stop the poem of being so great ;)

    You Keep Up Your Nice Work
    Best Of Luck
    NemO xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Renae

    Wow I relate to this so much, my best guy friend started going out with this girl and now it feels like I don't matter anymore and it just really sux!

  • 18 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    I hope I could cheer you up... It is really toouching...... Truthful... Speechless me ....

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessy

    Love this poem. . I can totally relate!! you totally made my favorites

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    It's really good, i wish i could write like that

  • 17 years ago

    by Brandy

    FINALLY!!!!! A poem that explains EXACTLY how i feel!! It is so hard to want to be with someone, but they dont want to be with you. And its so hard to know that they want to be with someone else, and you just have to sit there and lie, and say "I'm happy for you." I lied and said, "i like you as just a friend", but it hurts to know that i lied to him, and he never knew how i truly felt about him.

    Keep em' coming
    Brandy

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    5/5 again. Brilliant.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarahh

    Wow its so good i love it
    5/5
    top work

  • 16 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    Wat n da world r u talkin bout if it sucks dat was really really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Wow This is EXACTLY how I feel in every shape and form. I know how you feel. And it seems the more you linger on those words JUST FRIENDS the more it hurts. However time has passed and I have learnt to move on. Well Not to hurt so much when I see him with her.

  • 15 years ago

    by l0VEiSPAiN

    I feel the pain
    i experienced it..uqqh
    but i had to move on like he did..i found my love
    5/5..excellent job!

  • 13 years ago

    by ladiiie

    Awwwww ii love it... :'( it is a really good poem btw. ii know exactly how you feel.. kuz ii am going thru the same thing right now

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Goodbyes always hurt when your heart is not ready to let go

  • 7 years ago

    by ketaki

    Very nice... good discribe

  • 3 years ago

    by Jack

    Wow!