Very inspiring piece!
"And you search for a path
That's not on the map" I love these lines, beautifully written! Great job!

Excellent job well done 5/5
Oohh im commentin your work
So now you gotta kill me twice..

How inspiring!!!!
lol..really loved it.
I usually dont like it or find it hard ot read when there is no rhythm scheme or anything but i liked how this one flowed.
Sorry ive taken a while to comment..hope all is good xoxo

Hey Hunny!

I'm at school, it's lunch hour and krys and I got bored so we stole a computer lol... KIDDING but anyways, I just saw the update and I wonna say CONGRATS! damn you doing all this in less time then I did, I'm so proud of you, *hugs and Kisses* I love you so much, keep up the hard work and the wonderful poems =) Lol gotta love the feeling of seeing the Silver Favs award eh?

See you Tonight
Thing One < 3 forever yours!