I don't really know what this is about, I got a little lost, so this time there wasn't imagery, haha. Anyways, it's cool, I like how you wored things, the flow could be a litte weird at sometimes because I didn't really know what I was reading..good write.

Maybe I'm a bit warped after just finishing reading Marilyn Manson's autobiography (The Long Hard Road Out OF Hell) but this poem is genious. I can actually pick a few things out of it, anywhere from society promoting sex as the new cool to the mindwashed drug dependent sychophants looking for their fix. This, to me, actually is very well written and I love it, I shall be reading it again. Amazing poem!

Alright, maybe I understand some parts of it now.