by J Lau Feb 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
If everything happened for a reason, |
I can feel a lil emotions but I feel tht there should b more in there...it feels like something is missing...but hey thts just me rite? its just a good poem...i mean its good and all but it feels lik somethin is missin so a 4/5 for me |
by Fsams
Beautiful piece with a nice flow and a great insight plus flowing meanings. The last lines tell no matter what the most important thing is that you know you love. Great 5/5 |
Very cute.. through all the confusion, your love reigns true. |
by Chelsey
Very unique, and I enjoyed it very much. Great job, not many errors at all. Hm. I'm considering adding you to my favorites. :] |
by Bridget
Hey thanks for entering this poem in my contest! i really enjoyed reading it because it was so filled with emotion and feeling! this poem definitely shows that poems don't have to rhyme to be good. well done, and keep the great work up! :D |