Comments : Sometimes I wonder...

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Full of emotion. Very sad and sweet. The imagery is great. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Hey thanks for entering this poem in my contest! i really enjoyed reading it because it was so filled with emotion and feeling! this poem definitely shows that poems don't have to rhyme to be good. well done, and keep the great work up! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Very unique, and I enjoyed it very much. Great job, not many errors at all. Hm. I'm considering adding you to my favorites. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Very cute.. through all the confusion, your love reigns true.

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Beautiful piece with a nice flow and a great insight plus flowing meanings. The last lines tell no matter what the most important thing is that you know you love. Great 5/5

    With love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I can feel a lil emotions but I feel tht there should b more in there...it feels like something is missing...but hey thts just me rite? its just a good poem...i mean its good and all but it feels lik somethin is missin so a 4/5 for me