I really liked this one. I thought that it said a lot and that you captured the emotions very well. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Excellent job..im lovin your work..Great job..but like i said b4 make it a lil longer..you could score so much with it being longer.Great job again
5/5
~The Broken Man~

Good poem, original, can relate for the most part, good emotion too it. very good job 5/5

This was put together very beautifully....and yet so simple..i loved it

Wow, real emotion, I feel it, good job
°•Thorn•°

Wow, awesome Job. I loved it. This was very well written. you might want to make it alittle longer, other than that amazing Job.

~Joe~

This is really good & I can relate to it. & most of the time.. they're not worth it. But this is really good.. keep up the good work! 5/5**

Congrats on gettin 3rd in my contest. u were excellent. this was a gr8 poem as well. makes u think. 5/5

This is a nice poem! yet so sad! knw how u feel there!!!

Nice one. the emotions were felt but i would have liked them to be a little deeper.
it flowed okay most of the time, keep writing
xxxxx

Aww no hun. this was so sad :(
i hope your doing ok!! Another great poem.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Wow that was really good you can tell what you were feeling keep up the good work!!!!