Call it a journey

by alive in death   Feb 28, 2006


A field of harvest,
many fruits have grown.
many seeds have been sown,
but what shall the planter reap?
as he attends to pamper his sapling's,
he sees that his work has payed off,
hours of attending to the nurture of the benefit.
but over night,
all his work is ruined.....
his one mistake was forgotten covering.
his work being spoiled,
his plants having had died.....
he curses his effort,
and wishes he had never tried.
but what can you do when your strives turn to defeat?
will you curse your effort like the man that nature beet?
or will you bless the occasion,
and take from it the happy memories,
and learn from the mistakes.....
call it a journey.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Wow that was really good i liked it. thanks for that comment i have lots to offer and i will be your friend..that poem though it was just something to write..but yes flashbacks arenot easy and i have lived through many attempts to end it all and they all faild but i am happy to be here.Beacuse if i was not..i could not talk to you and i would not be in a relationship with the person i love and he loves me back.Wow thats a new one for me no one has ever loved me lol.
    SO stay in touch
    new friend

    andrea

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I'm going to give this one a five as well. at first when i read the nature part i wasn't to sure what id think of the poem. but as long as u aren't being dramticly poetic about leafs on a tree i'll probably like it. :p c ya.5

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