Comments : Tell me...

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Hi i really like this poem alot you know why well it's because this actually did happen to me but see we weren't getting married he said that i was going to be his wifey for life and next thing i knew he had a another wifey for 2years and he was that one who broke it off with me because i wouldnt come and see him when he wanted me to come see him it was all a big mistake all i have to say never deal with a guy thats far from you like two city's away from you or farther you know why because then can do stuff behind your back and you find out the wrong way but anyways i like your poem and keep up the good work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Xellent work once again

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    This is great, real sad i can feel the emotion and pain...sorry this happened to u. its happened to me too ! keep ur head up dont stop writing

  • 18 years ago

    by purva bhatia

    Its sad to see that it happened to so many of us.
    yes...it happened with me too..
    wondered if this is what all guys do!??!
    we were together for just one season....
    he left me without any rhyme or reason.
    gave him all my heart, i loved him a lot
    but in return tears is all that i got...
    i shouted, i cried
    i cried so much...
    but soon realised he wasn't worthy of my love.
    but one thing i always prayed
    was that he may regret what he did..
    and it happened soon...it happened quick..
    he cried infront of me then
    and asked me to forget and forgive!!
    i am sure your guy regrets it too..
    he is or shall be sorry for losing you.
    but today i feel that such
    experiences are important for all..
    we all must get hurt
    we all must fall...
    For it helps us grow
    it makes us strong..
    Life doesn't stop for anyone..
    Life must continue and we must move on.