Awww hun that was cute and sad very nice. xoxo Rach

Wow!!! speechless this poem is REALLY REALLY good, and so sad. You have a special talent so stick with it

5/5

I really like this poem.. i know how you feel cause my last words to Desire' werent good enough.. i wish i could of told her how good of a friend she was to me and how much i loved her.. i go to her grave and talk to her but i'm not sure if she can hear me.. but i really like this poem.. keep up the great work..

Always
Maria

That was a very good poem, it is also very true

That was incredible, it had so much emotion and feeling it made me want to help, beautful

Great!